Rebecca--
This is an interesting paper on the Pan Torso. You find some nice images for comparison and [garble] do(?) more fully explain the stylistic [something] and Hellenistic qualities of the piece. All the major issues were touched upon but a bit more detail would help. Overall this is a nice paper on an intriguing piece.
Victor
B+
Victor sucks.
and has bad handwriting.
and doesn't know quality writing.
and signs his name like "Voth".
and there's no need to circle the grade.
Victor sucks.
I second that
I got a B+ on mine too and his comment was that I seemed to start rambling around page 7. What does he expect when you're trying to write 10 pages about an Etruscan head??
writing about art is like trying to eat soup with a fork. art is for viewing.
